正文中我们写作要做到选词精当

thank you.[5]

i think you can give a good performance to me to pass the accident. [3]

网友作文二:

asking them to prepare alternative work for the day.

i would like to notify you that [1]the computer system of our company's will be shut down on this tuesday for a whole day long 商务英语方向研究生[2]on account of the system needs a upgrade.[3]therefore, please taking notice of this event in advance, in case of some potential inconveniences and troubles on tuesday, yet prepare alternative work for that day. [4]

网友作文一:

telling them when it will happen

to: all staff

memorandum

from: office manager

[3]这不能杭州商务英语培算作accident, 既然已经计划好了整句去掉换成thank you.

date : 25/8

informing staff of the shutdown

subject: the company system

名师修改意见:

本期作文题目:

[2]有中式英文的痕迹:我要求你们改为:please prepare alternative work if you have to use the computer.

[4]这句话看起来非常不清楚,主语在哪里?please 的后面是吗?改成:please make sure that you have prepared alternative work.

[1]businebec剑桥商务英语网ss writing 中尽量少使用because....so... 这样的结构,看起来不够专业,改为:as we plan to upgrade.....

[3]如果你不能保证用长复句可以表达清楚,那么建议换成短句吧拆成几个短句也许表达更贴切呢

[2]去掉,多余了

because our computor system will be upgraded by the contractors on 28 auguest, so the system will be shut down for a full day on that day[1], i ask for you prepare alternative商务英语是什么专业 work for the[2] day. and the work don't use computer system .

write a memo of 40-50 words:

tom

名师修改意见:

老师提示:

商务写作中遵循的原则是:简洁,精确,礼貌在考试中或者工作中,格式基本已经 给出,所以只需要我们写正文即可备忘录属于半正式的文体写作,所以在句子选择 上可以适当放宽,不必太正式

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from : tom to : all staff

[1]去掉这个开头,直接用被动语态开头

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[5]另换一行

you are the office manager at an insurance companbec剑桥商务英语网y. you have arranged for contractors to upgrade your computer system. this means the system will be shut down for a full day.

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